My newest Fanfiction

.: Jedi Abba :. · Jedi Knight

This here is my newest, I have been working on it for a while...and I have posted it on two sites for feedback. So I'm hoping to get a bit of feed back here as well. I suppose I will post one part at a time. This will cover my Roleplay character's backstory and a bit about how she became a Jedi.
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Abba tossed and turned in her sleep. She hadn’t been sleeping well lately; every night brought back old memories, and some things that she had never seen before. This all really troubled her. At first she thought these dreams could have to do with what may happen in the future. She wasn’t certain.

Out of the blue she saw herself in a moment she often thought of. She stood in the center of the Jedi Council Chamber Room. She was a youngling again. All eyes of the Jedi council were on her. She was nervous, and sweating. They all stared at her, as if she had done something wrong. Without anything else being said she was dismissed. Abba left the council room and found herself leaning against a wall with tears rolling down her face. It wasn’t much longer until a familiar sound had been heard.

Clank, Clank, Clank. She knew it was the sound of a certain Jedi’s cane. Abba looked to the left of her to see master Yoda standing next to her.

“Repeat after me you will.” Yoda said looking at Abba. “There is no emotion; there is peace.”

Abba wiped her eyes. “There is no emotion; there is peace.” She stood up and looked down on Yoda. She wasn’t much taller than he was; she was only five years old. “What is to become of me Master Yoda?”

“Hope there still is for you.”

“I can still become a Jedi Knight?”

“Extra training it may take, but a Knight you will become.”

Abba let out a big grin that spread across her face. “May I be excused, Master?”

“Yes, Abba. Run along.”

Abba bowed towards the small master and turned around and made her way to her quarters.

Suddenly everything was dark. Abba sprang out of her bed and turned on her light. It is only another dream. She said to herself calmingly.

She slowly sat up and wiped the sweat from her forehead. It was only a reminder. Reminding you how lucky you are. Lucky to be a Jedi. She stood up and made her way outside. She loved the outdoors…the fresh air, the sounds of animals, everything. It could always clam her.

.: Dark Light :. · Your Freaking Leader

dang thats pretty cool

.: Jedi Abba :. · Jedi Knight

Abba had sat outside for a while, she was calm now. She had decided she would walk over to the temple and eat her first meal of the day, she was a bit hungry. She figured since she was still a bit spooked, a meal may help her a little.

A few minutes later Abba was sitting down starring at the, so called, foodinfront of her. She didn't know what it was. It was red and in a square shape. She poked it a few times and it didn't move, that was good. She went ahead and ate it. When she was done she decided she would stop by on of the padawan classes and check up on their progress.

She walked down the empty halls of the temple. She was surprised not to meet a master, or even a youngling through the halls. She walked silently into one of Master Yoda's classes. He was teaching a group of younglings about the force.

"What makes the force work, Master?" A young boy asked.

"Learn that you will, on your own." Yoda said to the class. Abba smiled, it was the same thing he had told her class.

The boy was short, no taller four feet tall. He had short black hair, with the padawan braid along one ear. The boy probably was no older than six years of age. He had yet had a lightsaber of his own.

Abba didn't know the young boy's name, but she had seen him around before. A few minutes later the class had ended and the younglings all ran out of the door quickly for a break. Abba slowly approached Yoda.

"Master Yoda?" She asked trying to get his attention.

He was silent, he didn't reply for a few moments. "Nice to see you it is, Abba. Is there a problem?" He asked.

"Well, yes. I keep having those dreams," She replied.

"In the future, did this one take place?"

"Not this time. This one was just a memory. Of the time I got in trouble, the dream was mostly of our conversation."

"Worry about these dreams you should not, Abba." The master reminded her. He was always telling her not to worry about them. "Think more about these dreams you do than choosing a padawan."

He was correct there. Abba spent so much time afraid of her dreams she never did pay much attention to skillful younglings.

"Yes, master. I understand." Abba began to leave the room. Once she made it to the doorway she turned around and looked at Yoda once more. "What about that boy, the one that asked the question?" She asked.

"Ready for a master, he is not,” Yoda replied.

Abba pulled her brown hair away from her eyes. "Why not?" She asked with concern.

"Ready soon, he will be,” Yoda frowned. "That is all I must say."

"Thank you, master." Abba bowed and left the room. She smiled when saw the younglings outside of the doorway. All of the younglings, except one. The young boy. Abba's smile quickly faded away, she wanted to talk to him.

She quickly walked off to find the boy.

.: Zoxa Jod :. · Youngling

Obviously, its good Abba, ive read it before

.: Jedi Abba :. · Jedi Knight

Well of course its good...anything that has to do with me is bound to be good Cool

.: Dark Light :. · Your Freaking Leader

lol you think highly of yourself huh Razz

.: Jedi Abba :. · Jedi Knight

Of course. Cool

I was Joking though...

.: Dark Light :. · Your Freaking Leader

lol I know Cool

.: Jedi Abba :. · Jedi Knight

Abba walked down a long hallway in the temple. She peaked through every door way, the boy wasn’t to be found. Abba found herself becoming somewhat worried. She was now jogging down the hallways looking for the young boy. He is young, innocent, what could he ever be doing? Abba asked herself.

Suddenly Abba found a big set of double doors. She smiled; she knew where the boy was. Abba opened one of the doors and slowly walked in. She found the young boy sitting on a large rock, with a pebble in his hand. He threw it into a large puddle of water. Abba looked around and smiled. It had been too long since she took the time to come and relax in the Room of a Thousand Fountains. She often came here as a younger Jedi. Abba smiled again, this time letting out a bit of a laugh.

The boy turned around with a look on his face that expressed him being frightened. He quickly stood up and walked toward the double doors and turned around. “I’m sorry, Master Abba. I must be going. I have a youngling’s class with Master Yoda.” The boy slowly bowed and then slipped out of the room. Abba sighed and turned around. She only wanted to know the young Jedi’s name. She wasn’t sure when, but she would discover his name eventually. All of a sudden, Abba had an idea! She followed the boy quietly and into class.

“Nice of you to join us, it is, Komali.” Yoda said when the boy entered the doorway. The boy nodded, and then pulled out his training Lightsaber and ignited it. He then took his spot next to another padawan. By this time Abba was completely standing in the doorway looking over the class. “Look over these younglings form, will you?” Yoda asked turning to her.

“Of course, Master Yoda.” Abba said with smile. She circled around the young Jedi. They were learning their very first lightsaber form. Abba could remember when she was in this exact class, learning the same thing as the younglings. She made it to where Komali was standing. He had a green lightsaber, Abba smiled at him and bent down so she was at his level. “So your name is Komali?” She asked.

The young boy said nothing, just nodded.

.: Dark Light :. · Your Freaking Leader

dang the room of a thousand fountains. Never heard of it. Good story is there more?

.: Jedi Abba :. · Jedi Knight

It is located in the Jedi temple. It isn't in any of the movies, but it is a major setting in one of the Jedi Apprentice series.

This is about all I could find over it in the wikipedia:

.: Jedi Abba :. · Jedi Knight

Abba felt somewhat hurt that the young boy woukdn't talk to her. She had thought a lot about the moment when he acctuall did talk to her. It was almost as though, he didn't like her. As though he was scared of her. She couldn't think of any reasons why he should be scared of her.

A few days later after her last encounter with Komali she was called into the council room. She stood in the center of the room, with several council members surrounding her. Some were absent due to the war. Master Yoda stood up and looked at Abba. "An appprentice, the council has found for you." He said smiling. Abba had an odd look on her face, she was confused. "Train him, you must. A great Jedi, he could become with the correct training."

Abba looked at the face of each present council member. "Who is it?" She asked.

Mace Windu looked at each member and then nodded. "His name is Samuel. He is in Yoda's youngling class. He has made great progress. We have all voted that he would do best under you training." Master Windu said.

Abba nodded. She was happy that the council believed she could train this youngling, but she also thought that Yoda had wanted her to train Komali. She bowed at the council, turned and left. She made her way out of the council chamber before thinking to herself. What will ahppen to Komali without a master? She wondered. I shouldn't worry about this now. Abba reminded herself. She was then off to meet her new apprentice.

.: Jedi Abba :. · Jedi Knight

Abba went into a empty room to meet her new apprentince, Samuel. Abba looked around and saw no one. Abba took a seat and waited. A few moments later, a figure walked through the door.

"Master Abba?" The figure asked. Abba stood up.

"Samuel?" Abba questioned.

"Yes." Abba smiled.

"I hear you are a good duelist for your age."

"I guess."

"Well thats what Master Yoda told me."

The padawan shrugged. Abba looked at him. He was the species Nautolan, just like Master Kit Fisto, of the Jedi Council.

"When will I be given my first assignment?" Samuel asked.

"First we must prove to the council that we are fit for an actual mission. With the war going on, every mission could be deadly. We must prove we are ready."

"You may just call me Sam."

"Okay." Abba looked out a window of the temple to see the outsides of Coruscant. She was ready for a mission, she was ready to leave the temple for a while. "I suppose you better get going so you arn't late to your first class."

"Yes master." Sam said as he left the room.

It was odd, having a padawan picked for Abba, that she had never met. Most Master and apprentince pairs knew each other before they were assigned to each other, Abba knew she would only have to work hard to build a good relation ship with Sam.

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